It was rather beautiful the way he put her insecurities to sleep. The way he dove Into her eyes and starved all of her fears. And tasted all the dreams she kept coiled beneath her bones. The way he lit her darkness, and fed her love; with an antique spoon.
This is short but so so powerful. Incredible use of words!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much!!! :)
DeleteShort and sweet. Mostly sweet.
ReplyDelete"It was rather beautiful" - interesting phrase to open with.
I loved your figurative language: "put her insecurities to sleep" and "dove into her eyes" and "tasted all the dreams...coiled beneath her bones" and so on. Very unique and evocative.
And ohmigosh the antique spoon.
ohmigosh hahaha thanks nelson!
DeleteHow did you do this? Teach me how to write please.
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